letslearn
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- 11 Sep 2013
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Hi Guys,
I'm working on an example sentence using the verb 凍る。
I have two attempts. I was wondering if they are correct. Also in the first sentence I feel I'm using redundant words. So is the second one more precise? (If it is correct in the first place)
水は温が0度に達すると水が凍って氷になる。
水温は0度に達すると凍って氷になる.
よろしくお願いします。
I'm working on an example sentence using the verb 凍る。
I have two attempts. I was wondering if they are correct. Also in the first sentence I feel I'm using redundant words. So is the second one more precise? (If it is correct in the first place)
水は温が0度に達すると水が凍って氷になる。
水温は0度に達すると凍って氷になる.
よろしくお願いします。