hi there! could you please help me with this sentence?
医者さんに結果を聞いていただいてから、いそいそと走 って帰った。
i found this sentence on another forum. (japanforum to be exact)
are there any mistakes?
thanks in advance!
いただく , which is a polite form for もらう, alone means like this:
I am given something by someone.
And another verb (the ending changed)+いただくmeans like this:
I am given by somebody the honor of doing something.
So 医者さんに結果を聞いていただいて means:
I was given by the doctor the honor of hearing the result. In this case, the doctor heard. Normally, doctors should tell the results, so that Japanese sounds strange. However, when you do want to say the doctor heard, that might be acceptable at least if you should put お before 医者さん.
Or if you want to say you heard the result, it should be お医者さんに結果を聞いて. No polite form for the verb is required. You don't have to give respect to the subject 'you.' But to the listening partner, to sound more friendly or feminine, お医者さん would be better. Otherwise, 医者 is good.
Another point, for no clear reason, いそいそと doesn't go well with 走る. Some Japanese may say OK, but いそいそと(cheerfully) goes with less active verbs.