Hey guys I need a little help on this in English grammar

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Do I say this...

Adventurous cyclist of Japan

Or

Adventurous cyclist in Japan

What does this sound even better
Adventure cyclist touring Japan?

I'm kind of confused which is correct maybe they're both correct I don't know anyway you English majors you know chime in okay appreciate it.
 
Adventurous Cyclist just sounds a little like a descriptive term, "of Japan" sounds a bit like a direct translation of 日本の, and both "of Japan" and "in Japan" are both rather passively voiced.

I'd go with "Adventure Cyclist Touring Japan" as it sounds like "Adventure Cyclist" is a title, and your current mission is to tour Japan
 
Adventurous Cyclist just sounds a little like a descriptive term, "of Japan" sounds a bit like a direct translation of 日本の, and both "of Japan" and "in Japan" are both rather passively voiced.

I'd go with "Adventure Cyclist Touring Japan" as it sounds like "Adventure Cyclist" is a title, and your current mission is to tour Japan
Okay I'll go with that thank you.
 
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There are some clever T-shirts out there. Can't wait to see yours.
 
Yeah I'm going to change the wording of the the words on the I'm going to do it I've already got the artwork done it's pretty cool and people know me already so it's pretty cool man I got to admit I've had them two comments looking forward to another tour I mean I've been in Okinawa Islands here for like I guess 40 days almost and I'm ready to make a change save some money again and then hop on the bike yeah hop on the bike again and see this country it's really nice I mean I don't know there's like 42 million tourists that come to this country now and just imagine if 3% of those are bicyclists and they want to buy my t-shirt yeah I'm doing this for business yeah it's I don't know how it's going to work out but that's kind of like my plan.
 
In order to sell merch, you need a storefront and a willing customer base. I would recommend setting yourself up with a tiktok/youtube/instagram channel (come up with a cool name to brand yourself with) and start publishing short videos of your rides and experiences in Japan. You can try to develop a fan base, who might be interested in merch. Especially if you are at an event or something where you are speaking or tabling, that's a good place to sell merchandise.

Wataru Iino is a good example of someone who has made a brand of his adventuring, more catered to a Japanese audience. I'm sure he's on other platforms but here's his youtube: https://www.youtube.com/@wataruiinosmilerunningchan952

Unless you have a place where you can store t-shirts and the ability to fulfill orders, or have an agreement with shops to carry your t-shirts (either by consignment or buying them wholesale from you), I would warn against sinking money into printing shirts. You can try on-demand print services like RedBubble that will produce and ship your product with your design (which is very little overhead for you and you can sell worldwide), but you won't be making a whole lot per unit sold, which means you'll need to sell a lot of shirts for it to be more than a few bucks here and there. Also, these kinds of items are more impulse purchases, which is why I think you'll have better luck tabling at events or wholesaling them to tourist stores, or promoting them through your own sales channels. But then you have all the overhead and up-front costs, plus you have to deal with a bunch of t-shirts that may not sell as fast as you'd like.

Now that I know what you're asking for, I would actually have a design that says "Adventure Cyclist" and "Japan Tour," with a cool image sandwiched in the middle, like a Samurai on a bike, or a loaded touring bike on a picturesque Japanese byway, or even just leaned against a conbini in the countryside. That's the kind of thing that may appeal to people who see themselves as Adventure Cyclists, coming to Japan for their own tour. Smaller merch items like stickers, enamel pins, etc might also be worth looking into. Sites like RedBubble will let you upload a design and then choose which items you want to offer with your image.

Selling merch is one of many ways to capitalize on your adventures, but it's not passive by any means. If you build up an audience online, you can have exclusive content for channel members (youtube) or Patreon patrons, simply ask for donations (gofundme, buymeacoffee, etc), or do amazon affiliates and offer gear reviews. In any case, your first step is building an audience.
 
In order to sell merch, you need a storefront and a willing customer base. I would recommend setting yourself up with a tiktok/youtube/instagram channel (come up with a cool name to brand yourself with) and start publishing short videos of your rides and experiences in Japan. You can try to develop a fan base, who might be interested in merch. Especially if you are at an event or something where you are speaking or tabling, that's a good place to sell merchandise.

Wataru Iino is a good example of someone who has made a brand of his adventuring, more catered to a Japanese audience. I'm sure he's on other platforms but here's his youtube: https://www.youtube.com/@wataruiinosmilerunningchan952

Unless you have a place where you can store t-shirts and the ability to fulfill orders, or have an agreement with shops to carry your t-shirts (either by consignment or buying them wholesale from you), I would warn against sinking money into printing shirts. You can try on-demand print services like RedBubble that will produce and ship your product with your design (which is very little overhead for you and you can sell worldwide), but you won't be making a whole lot per unit sold, which means you'll need to sell a lot of shirts for it to be more than a few bucks here and there. Also, these kinds of items are more impulse purchases, which is why I think you'll have better luck tabling at events or wholesaling them to tourist stores, or promoting them through your own sales channels. But then you have all the overhead and up-front costs, plus you have to deal with a bunch of t-shirts that may not sell as fast as you'd like.

Now that I know what you're asking for, I would actually have a design that says "Adventure Cyclist" and "Japan Tour," with a cool image sandwiched in the middle, like a Samurai on a bike, or a loaded touring bike on a picturesque Japanese byway, or even just leaned against a conbini in the countryside. That's the kind of thing that may appeal to people who see themselves as Adventure Cyclists, coming to Japan for their own tour. Smaller merch items like stickers, enamel pins, etc might also be worth looking into. Sites like RedBubble will let you upload a design and then choose which items you want to offer with your image.

Selling merch is one of many ways to capitalize on your adventures, but it's not passive by any means. If you build up an audience online, you can have exclusive content for channel members (youtube) or Patreon patrons, simply ask for donations (gofundme, buymeacoffee, etc), or do amazon affiliates and offer gear reviews. In any case, your first step is building an audience.
Thank you so much for your kind words and advice I am really spot on what my goal is with the T-shirt I never knew about the the links that you told me about and I'm working on the the words on the T-shirt right now and once that's completed hopefully today then I'll post a picture of them the T-shirt design and I've had two comments that already that have saw the design the first of photocop of it and they said it was pretty cool the other one well the other comment was neutral didn't really much say anything but yeah I really appreciate your advice if you have any other advice let me know or just PM me because I actually I'm a full-time cyclist here in Japan I usually cycle from April to well now actually this is November now so this is my first time actually camping up till November and I want to have my own t-shirt and then I want the merchandise it as you mentioned and that is my goal yeah and I have someone to to assist me I believe I do and I'll keep you informed on it and really if you have any other information to help me out please let me know and either PM me or just posted here and I do have the design already as you know as you may or may not know I'm called turtle speed cyclists and I have that copyrighted already since 5 years ago and anyway I'm pretty excited about it we have to have a dream in life especially when you're my age I mean I there are people my age all they do is sitting from the television all day long and drink sake that is not my lifestyle by all means.
 
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