Nice work there Saralyne san !! It looks like you've got the Japanese touch down. A couple of the earlier (?) works could be given a little more solidity--say, for example, in color depth, or coverage.
Please do post some more, and keep up the work. I'll do the same. . .although I don't do manga. Thanks for sharing ! See you 'round !
and no, I wouldn't think that too much cursing is good on the forum--in some places, in some soft manner or whatever, one can find it, but not when it is simply not needed or is out of place.