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[Senshi]

I would really love to learn Japanese, so I went to find out how to actually fully introduce myself, like my name, age, residence, hobbies, job, interests and all that sort of stuff. Cause how would you make your own Japanese profile if you don't have a good "about me"? Unfortunately the only thing I can come up with till now is my name, age and residence because lots of websites teach you how to do that, but I haven't seen one that teaches you how to thoroughly introduce yourself. So if anyone could help me with that, I would really appreciate it.

P.S. - Only translation is not really gonna help me, so if you could explain things like sentence structure, the words used, etc, that would really help me out. And Romaji after Hiragana would really help a lot too, thank you in advance.

P.P.S. - If this sounds more like a demand than a request, I apologize by all means.

 

[undrentide]

I understood your intention but asking how to write a through self-introduction and explation on each grammatical points is like asking for writing an entire grammar book...

If you already learn some basic things, you can try it yourself first, then ask for correction or phrase/sentence you do not know how to make.

Following sites are just a few examples where you can learn the basic phrase/sentence and grammar.

Chiron's Survival Japanese Course
Teach Yourself Japanese
Learn Japanese | Tae Kim's Guide to Learning Japanese

Gambatte kudasai.

 

[Senshi]

Ok I'm gonna write this down in both Hiragana/Katakana and Romaji for my own sake.

☝

あら、 ありがとございます!
さて。

はじめまして。
ぼくは戦士です。
オランダからきました。
私は中学を卒業しました。
わたしの趣味はテレビ下エムと映画と音楽です。
どぞよろしくお願いします。

Ara, arigato gozaimasu!
Sate.

Hajimemashite.
Boku ha Senshi desu.
Oranda kara kimashita.
Watashi ha chuugakkou wo sotsugyou shimashita.
Watashi no shumi ha terebi geemu to eiga to ongaku desu.
Dozo yoroshiku onegaishimasu.

Oh, thank you!
Now.

Nice to meet you.
My name is Senshi.
I'm from the Netherlands.
I've graduated from middle school.
My hobbies are video games, movies and music.
Please be kind to me.

What a relief that I was able to put this down here, if there's any mistakes, tell me.

P.S. - I thought of putting it down in English so that you would understand what I was trying to reach here.

 

[Red5]

Ok I'm gonna write this down in both Hiragana/Katakana and Romaji for my own sake.



あら、 ありがとございます!
さて。

はじめまして。
ぼくは戦士です。
オランダからきました。
私は中学を卒業しました。
わたしの趣味はテレビ下エムと映画と音楽です。
どぞよろしくお願いします。

Ara, arigato gozaimasu!
Sate.

Hajimemashite.
Boku ha Senshi desu.
Oranda kara kimashita.
Watashi ha chuugakkou wo sotsugyou shimashita.
Watashi no shumi ha terebi geemu to eiga to ongaku desu.
Dozo yoroshiku onegaishimasu.

Oh, thank you!
Now.

Nice to meet you.
My name is Senshi.
I'm from the Netherlands.
I've graduated from middle school.
My hobbies are video games, movies and music.
Please be kind to me.

What a relief that I was able to put this down here, if there's any mistakes, tell me.

P.S. - I thought of putting it down in English so that you would understand what I was trying to reach here.

I don't know what's this Japanese coz it's first time I see like this words ,
but as I know here .....

あ、 ありがとございます!
今
はじめまして。
私の名前はセンシです。or 私はセンシです。
オランダから来ました。
私の趣味はテレビ下エムと映画と音楽です。
どぞよろしくお願いします。


A, arigato gozaimasu!
ima

Hajimemashite.
watashinonamaewa senshi desu. OR watashi wa senshi desu.
orando kara kimashita
Watashi no shumi ha terebi geemu to eiga to ongaku desu.
Dozo yoroshiku onegaishimasu.


Oh, thank you!
Now.

Nice to meet you.
My name is Senshi.
I'm from the Netherlands.
I've graduated from middle school. ( I don't know this in Japanese )
My hobbies are video games, movies and music.
Please be kind to me. OR nice to meet you ....

that's what I know in Japanese and I hope that's right !
and Nice to meet you here senshi san

Katsumoto

 

[undrentide]

あら、 ありがとございます!
さて。

はじめまして。
ぼくは戦士です。
オランダからきました。
私は中学を卒業しました。
わたしの趣味はテレビ下エムと映画と音楽です。
どぞよろしくお願いします。

Oh, thank you!
Now.

Nice to meet you.
My name is Senshi.
I'm from the Netherlands.
I've graduated from middle school.
My hobbies are video games, movies and music.
Please be kind to me.

You did it quite well.


There're so far only two errors, and I think they are not really mistake but more like typing errors.

わたしの趣味はテレビゲームと映画と音楽です。
どうぞよろしくお願いします。

I do not know schooling system in Netherlands, so I'm not sure if middle school = 中学校. In Japan, 中学校 (usually translated as junior high school) is for 3 years, from 13 years old till 15 years old, which is followed by 高校 which is also 3 years, from 16 till 18.

 

[Senshi]

Both thanks for your help!

@undrentide - Yeah I think I meant 高校 since I graduated around my 18th, so that must be right.

(どうぞ) lol, yup I've noticed, a typing mistake, I wrote dozo instead of douzo.

@katsumoto - A arigato! I think 今 is just the right one to use there, looks better than さて...

Well, thanks again, gonna go study again.

By the way, I just typed my own sentence in Japanese and wanted to see if it's correct. 日本人学ぶと難しいです。 nihonjin manabu to muzukashii desu. （What do you think?)

 

[Toritoribe]

ぼくは戦士です。

戦士 looks like an occupation rather than a name in that sentence, probably because it's not common as a person's name. It's better to say 戦士といいます or 名前は戦士です to avoid to be misunderstood.;-)

I think 今 is just the right one to use there, looks better than さて...

As a conjunction, さて is more appropriate in that context.

By the way, I just typed my own sentence in Japanese and wanted to see if it's correct. 日本人学ぶと難しいです。 nihonjin manabu to muzukashii desu. （What do you think?)

What did you want to say? I suppose 日本人(Japanese as a nation, Japanese people) would be 日本語(Japanese as a language)...

 

[Senshi]

I tried to say "It's difficult to learn the Japanese language."

 

[Toritoribe]

日本人学ぶと難しいです。

I tried to say "It's difficult to learn the Japanese language."

日本語を学ぶのは難しいです。

explanations of particles
を
Verb-related particles - Tae Kim's Japanese grammar guide
の
Noun-related particles - Tae Kim's Japanese grammar guide
は
The major particles - Tae Kim's Japanese grammar guide

 

[undrentide]

"Japanese" could mean either people or language, same goes with English, French, Dutch, Chinese, etc.
In Japanese, you always state which it is:

～人 (jin) = people
～語 (go) = language

e.g.
[people]
オランダ人 orandajin、日本人 nihonjin、フランス人 furansujin、中国人 chuugokujin
[language]
オランダ語 orandago、日本語 nihongo、フランス語 furansugo、中国語 chuugokugo

In English both of them are Dutch, Japanese, French, Chinese.

 

[Mike Cash]

When I hear "senshi" I generally associate it with 戦死 (dying in a battle). Maybe I spend too much time reading Japanese tombstones.

 

[Senshi]

When I hear "senshi" I generally associate it with 戦死 (dying in a battle). Maybe I spend too much time reading Japanese tombstones.

Right, because Senshi means "Warrior" or "Soldier".

 

[Mike Cash]

Right, because Senshi means "Warrior" or "Soldier".

Not at all.

戦士 (senshi) means "warrior".
戦死 (senshi) means "death in battle".

Welcome to the fun fun world of Japanese homonyms.

 

[Red5]

I tried to say "It's difficult to learn the Japanese language."

e.g.
[people]
オランダ人 orandajin、日本人 nihonjin、フランス人 furansujin、中国人 chuugokujin
[language]
オランダ語 orandago、日本語 nihongo、フランス語 furansugo、中国語 chuugokugo

In English both of them are Dutch, Japanese, French, Chinese.

I agree totally with her ....
so the character 語 go , it's used for language.