translation please

[Hanza]

kieta kimi o omoitsuzukeru koto shika dekinakute boku no kawaru koto no nai kimi e no omoi wa fukaku ima mo, sou aishiteiru...


could someone translate that for me? it would be much appreciated... to me though it seems like they are not using proper grammer... but what do i know... translation please!!!

 

[Mike Cash]

What part of it do you not understand?

 

[Hanza]

well, most of it... i know at the end it says i love you... but i tried translating the whole thing myself and all i got was something like this.(i dont think it is right) "i had feelings for you but you changed because of me and keep your emotions on the inside, so i love you..."

or something like that.... i just want a translation from someone who knows japanese alot better than i do..

(btw, this sentence has nothing to do with me... i am reading a story that a friend wrote on the net.)

 

[Mike Cash]

What part struck you as not being proper grammar?

 

[Hanza]

hmmmm... well, i did not see a subject marker... lol, guess it just did not sound right to me... sooo... whats it say?

 

[Elizabeth]

I don't mind doing it, if you dont' mind waiting until tonight when I have a chance...

 

[Mike Cash]

hmmmm... well, i did not see a subject marker...

You don't see the "wa"?

 

[Elizabeth]

I can't stop thinking of you that has disappeared and my feelings for you
that won't change are deep so (that) even now it seems I am in love

良い訳だと思います。

 

[Hanza]

arigatou!

ah, thanks elizabeth ^^... i was a little closer than i thought lol.... but thanks again ^^

 

[Elizabeth]

You don't see the "wa"?

He may have been looking for ga, the subject marker, but anyway it isn't necessary at all and doesn't fit grammatically into most sentences.

ah, thanks elizabeth ^^... i was a little closer than i thought lol.... but thanks again ^^

No problem. You could also think of a translation with my "deep and unchanging feelings." There are a lot of particular phrasings that are hard to write without laughing too much in English.

 

[Mike Cash]

This being the "Learning Japanese" subsection, I was sort of hoping to walk him through figuring the thing out rather than handing it to him on a platter.

 

[Elizabeth]

This being the "Learning Japanese" subsection, I was sort of hoping to walk him through figuring the thing out rather than handing it to him on a platter.

It's a translation that seems to be very removed from where the OP is right now. I hope the next set of questions are ones that he can more realistically learn from.