Translating webcomics

[Betsumei]

So, I got a bit bored last night and decided to try translating my favourite webcomic into Japanese. Probably waaay too ambitious for my skill level (is it possible to have negative skill?), but it was fun. So few webcomics seem to have translations, as near as I can find. How'd I do?

 

[Mike Cash]

楽しみのような音 = "Sounds like fun"?

 

[Toritoribe]

Ah, that makes sense. よう vs そう, and "a noun 音" vs "a verb 聞こえる"

 

[Mike Cash]

小さなやつ = "one little thing" ?