Simple Sentence Right or Wrong?

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ZachSilvey

後輩

8 Jul 2010

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• 16 Jul 2010

• #1

I intended this to say:
"I go to the gym everyday at 1 P.M."

わたしはまいにちごごいちじにジムでいきます。

My main concerns are:
Does it say that?
Is the sentence structure ok?
I am using the correct particles in the correct places?

Thank you in advance.

 

Last edited: 16 Jul 2010

Glenn

一切皆苦

8 Jan 2004

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• 16 Jul 2010

• #2

Everything is fine except で should be に.

 

Pepperoni Papaya

後輩

23 Jun 2010

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• 17 Jul 2010

• #3

I thought it should be: "ジムへいきます。"?

 

Glenn

一切皆苦

8 Jan 2004

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• 18 Jul 2010

• #4

That works too. Either one is fine, and I think actually you'd probably be more likely to hear the へ version in the Kansai area. At least that's been my experience.