please tell me if it's right...

[foxerish]

hi guys!
it has been long time I wasn't here...
is the grammar in these sentences right?
1) 俺の姉は東京で一番面白い呪文の授業を探しているよ (my sister looks for the most interesting spell lesson in tokyo)
2) 去年美香の姉の桜は大阪で太と結婚しました。太葉とて も親切ですょねえ (last year, mika's sister, sakura, married taro in osaka. taro is nice, isn't he?)

 

[Toritoribe]

GRAMMATICALLY, correct.

太 can't be read as たろう, commonly. Also, 葉 would be a typo of は.

 

[foxerish]

GRAMMATICALLY, correct.
太 can't be read as たろう, commonly. Also, 葉 would be a typo of は.

but are the sentences right?

 

[Toritoribe]

yes, except the awkwardness

 

[foxerish]

yes, except the awkwardness

what do you mean by awkwardness?

 

[Chidoriashi]

what do you mean by awkwardness?

Where you used incorrect Kanji characters.

 

[Toritoribe]

what do you mean by awkwardness?

Plus, the biggest problem is the sentence final particles. If you didn't use them, the sentences were perfectly correct.

俺の姉は東京で一番面白い呪文の授業を探している。
去年、美香の姉の桜は大阪で太郎と結婚しました。彼は とてもいい人です