Please critique my writing

[GoldCoinLover]

Hi everyone. . I'm self studying japanese 3 hrs a day now.I've been practicing writingand need to see if it's correct. I've carefully studied stroke order and proportions of each character trying to match. Please judge it. Thank

 

[adragast]

I think your writing is fine. Just the 2 "re" above the "wo" you have circled are not so good.

 

[KiaiFighter]

At the top of the page you wrote
"よかったでわありまえん。"
but the わ should be は (but pronounced "wa" like the particle).

Other than that, your writing looks decent. Just keep practicing! You'll get better and better!

 

[Glenn]

I don't think that's grammatical. よくありませんでした or よくなかったです would be right.

 

[KiaiFighter]

yeah, i wrote that just correcting the kana itself without thinking.
technically it should be よくなかったです。