Wow. I came up with a sentence from a dictionary! I guess it just proves that if you do put an infinite number of monkeys on an infinite number of typewriters, you will eventually get the complete works of Shakespeare!
Just some thoughts. Although it certainly COULD be the sentence just as you posted it, I take issue that it SHOULD be the sentence as you posted it.
That implies that there is only one correct way to say something, and that is rarely the case, my friend.