Does this sentence make sense?

[Anayalata]

表面的に内向的な人ですが、真実には私は恥かしがり屋 です。
(Superficially I appear to be an introverted person, but truthfully, I'm a shy person.)

 

[raguna]

表面的 should be okay I think, but I think you should use には. I would use the simpler よく内向的だと思われるが、実は恥ずかしがりやです。 Because superficially they both show the same signs..

 

[Toritoribe]

my attempt
内向的に見えますが、実際は恥ずかしがり屋なだけです。

 

[Anayalata]

ありがとう！たすかった。

「よく内向的だと思われるが、実は恥ずかしがり屋です。」をつかえました。

I couldn't figure out how to say it but Raguna helped me out a lot. Thanks to both.

 

[raguna]

ありがとう！たすかった。

「よく内向的だと思われるが、実は恥ずかしがり屋です。」をつかえました。

I couldn't figure out how to say it but Raguna helped me out a lot. Thanks to both.

Glad to be of help, hopefully it went well ^^

Were you doing an exercise on interesting jikoshoukai, or did you actually do a speech of some sort, or start a new job? (If you feel that it is private information, feel free not to share, I am just very curious by nature! Sorry if I creeped you out haha.)

 

[Anayalata]

It was actually a class presentation. A short 自己紹介

I sort of procrastinated and wrote it last minute. It was just one line I wanted to add in about my personality but I couldn't figure out how to word it.