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Could you check my translation, please?

Liuqahs15

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13 Nov 2011
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Hey guys, I'm practicing some Japanese vocabulary, and I wrote a short dialogue to test myself. Could you check it? Please be very critical of how natural and understandable it is, and don't be afraid to tell me when I'm just wrong. Thanks. The two speakers are Sara and Yukko.

サラ: ね、ゆっこ-ちゃん!
(Hey, Yukko!)

ゆっこ: なに?
(What?)

サラ: おねい-さん の けっこんしき は らいしゅう です よ。
(My sister's wedding is next week!)

ゆっこ: へええ? かれ が プロポジマシタ か?
(Really? Her boyfriend proposed to her?)

サラ: そう!ねい-さん は うれしい な です。
(Yeah! She's really happy)

ゆっこ: やっぱり! なんようび です か?そして なんじ です か? それ…
(Of course she is! What day of the week is it? And what time? It isn't at night, is it? That's too--)

サラ: ちょとまって ゆっこ-ちゃん! それ が サラ の ねい-さん の けっこん、のに ゆっこ が おらかな え ん…
(Slow down! Even though it's my sister's wedding, you're acting crazy!)

ゆっこ: ごめん ごめん! わたし わ ばかもの です ね。 うらやまし で…
(Sorry! I'm such an *****. I guess I'm just jealous)

サラ: わかって。 じゃ、それ は らいしゅう の どようび の にじじゅう…
(I understand. Alright, it's next week on Saturday at 2:15. Are you coming?)

ゆっこ: ひる に います か? やっぱり!
(It's in the afternoon? Of course it is!)

サラ: いつも って。
(You always say that...)
 
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