I have no idea if this is allowed or not...but please tell me if it is not.
I have written several AnCafe fanfiction, and as I don't have many friends on livejournal, I don't have the opinion of many people. Especially as it is Antikku fanfic, the friends I DO ask to read it don't a fully appreciate it. I would like to ask if anyone would read them, and give me their opinion.
I recently joined an Antikku roleplay. It was set in a university...according to the storyline, AnCafe has entered a university. There are also several other bands, but what matters to me most is AnCafe, of course. There also happens to be a new, all-girl band (Yes, I know, it's typical...but the thread is very organized, and the RPers there are all VERY literate). The university is rather unique, and is there to help bands bond together, to make them better than they already are, if you will.
Currently, I am the rhythm guitar in the girl-band (Parapluie) and also Yuuki and Takuya of AnCafe. I got around to roleplaying with the thread owner off the thread, and our characters from the original RP were pulled in. Some of the scenes that occured were really cute, so I decided to write them from the action form they were in (Because we were RPing on messenger, our RP went like this- Miku: *yawns widely* or something like that. Because we were feeling lazy, too. ^-^) to a fanfic-form, with proper grammar, punctuations, ect, and added a bit of my own twists. The scenes are all in my livejournal. I have written three so far. Two of the three were taken directly from my and Rini's RP, converted to a legible form. The last I wrote today, based on the situation we were currently in in the RP, but not taken from the RP itself; in other words, it is purely my work. Because I barely have anything to this, you can simply go to my livejournal and scroll down to the very bottom, and from the very first fic. It isn't necessary, but it would probably help you understand the new fic more. The one I want your opinion on most is the most recent one, .03, Maze, but I would like your thoughts on the others as well.
The band is Parapluie, and the line-up is as follows:
Vocals: Kaede
Lead Guitar: Rii
Rhythm Guitar: Rie
Bass: Ayame
Drums: Nathifa
Keyboard: Aiko
Should you want more information on the RP, Parapluie, or the girls, feel free to ask.
If you would like to read just Maze, then go here.
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If you would like to read from the beginning, then please go to my profile and scroll to the bottom. I have only two other small, un-RP related entries in my livejournal, so it should be fairly easy to find the three entries I specified. Please give me your thoughts, opinions, and constructive criticism!
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I almost think the older man who cut my hair checked out Miku or something. X'D I showed him the same pic as before (from the Snow Scene era), but... he cut me like "modern Miku"! x'D (not the very recent, this was in the beginning of June ;P) aah, that was a bit too... long for me. -,o :'( or something like that. My hair is so curly that KUYAAA <<' So, haven't gotten it cut since then, now I look like YUCK. <<' 
