Hello PXSoul,
Welcome to the board. I would say your first task is to watch out when converting hiragana into kanji. Your 石尾 should probably be 一緒, right? If you are a beginner you can stick with hiragana and people will understand from the context. Also,
おはゆございまず → おはようございます
日本語を話せるの人をしていません → 日本語を話せる人をしっていません(知っていません)probably.
こんにちわ民あーさん → こんにちはみなさん or こんにちはみんなさん
The use of わ instead of は in your thread title is also pretty acceptable nowadays, although purists might insist you use は.
Some other errors in your second sentence, but still understandable.
Good luck with your studies.