Please, Is This Right? # Idk

[Tomii515]

Hi everyone. I'm speaking Japanese! I speak a little Japanese. I'm bored. This video is really strange. Now I will do this video in fastforward. (fastforward) Now I will do this video in slowmotion. (slowmotion) ...Bye!
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konnichiwa minna. nihongo o hanashite imasu! nihongo o sukoshi hanashimasu. taikutsu desu. kono video wa sugoku hen na. ima wa kono video o hayaokuri de shimasu. (hayaokuri) ima wa kono video o suroo mooshon de shimasu. (suroo mooshon) ...Sayounara!




PLZ AND THANK YOU!!!!

 

[Tomii515]

sorry for being EXTREMELY impationt, but i need to know if this is right soon! sooo, thank you a LOT to people that answer!

 

[Elizabeth]

Hi everyone. I'm speaking Japanese! I speak a little Japanese. I'm bored. This video is really strange. Now I will do this video in fastfoward. (fastforward) Now I will do this video in slow motion. (slowmotion) ...Bye!
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konnichiwa minna. nihongo o hanashite imasu! nihongo o sukoshi hanashimasu. taikutsu desu. kono video wa sugoku hen na. ima wa kono video o hayaokuri de shimasu. (hayaokuri) ima wa kono video o suroo mooshon de shimasu. (suroo mooshon) ...Sayounara!
PLZ AND THANKYOU!!!!

It looks fine to me, although "hayaokuri"/ suroo mooshon de yarimasu may be better ?

もう日本語で書けないの？何かありましたか？他人のパソコンを使っていますか？
吹き込んで欲しい内容があれば、教えてもいい？

 

[Elizabeth]

sorry for being EXTREMELY impatient, but i need to know if this is right soon! sooo, thank you a LOT to people that answer!

ところで、意味が自然にかけているときは、感心して褒めたいと思いますよ。
でも、そんなにいらいらしてはいけませんね！！！ こういう人は扱いにくいひとだよ。
それで、誰も返事したくないですね。

(Then please don't be so impatient. !!! People like that are difficult to deal with. And no one will answer your questions.)

We only want to praise Tomii san when your Japanese is good and natural.

どうぞ宜しくお願いします。

 

[doinkies]

Yeah...people will respond eventually, just give them time to do so. ^^

 

[undrentide]

Hi everyone. I'm speaking Japanese! I speak a little Japanese. I'm bored. This video is really strange. Now I will do this video in fastfoward. (fastfoward) Now I will do this video in slowmottion. (slowmotion) ...Bye!
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konnichiwa minna. nihongo o hanashite imasu! nihongo ga sukoshi hanasemasu. taikutsu desu. kono video wa sugoku hen da. ima wa kono video o hayaokuri ni shimasu. (hayaokuri) ima wa kono video o suroo mooshon ni shimasu. (suroo mooshon) ...Sayounara!
PLZ AND THANKYOU!!!!

Just a few minor corrections. But Tomii, you did quite well!
Ganbatte ne!

 

[Elizabeth]

Just a few minor corrections. But Tomii, you did quite well!
Ganbatte ne!

Yeah, I grew suspicious at first when there were no good references to de hayaokuri but wasn't sure if the "ni" would fit what he was trying to say or not. Thanks ! The "hen na" I assumed was being purposefully casual and "wo hanashimasu" I took naively at face value.