Please critique my writing

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GoldCoinLover

後輩

24 May 2004

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• 25 Mar 2012

• #1

Hi everyone. . I'm self studying japanese 3 hrs a day now.I've been practicing writingand need to see if it's correct. I've carefully studied stroke order and proportions of each character trying to match. Please judge it. Thank

 

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adragast

後輩

25 Jun 2012

5

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• 25 Jun 2012

• #2

I think your writing is fine. Just the 2 "re" above the "wo" you have circled are not so good.

 

KiaiFighter

後輩

29 Aug 2012

4

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• 29 Aug 2012

• #3

At the top of the page you wrote
"よかったでわありまえん。"
but the わ should be は (but pronounced "wa" like the particle).

Other than that, your writing looks decent. Just keep practicing! You'll get better and better!

 

Glenn

一切皆苦

8 Jan 2004

7,842

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• 30 Aug 2012

• #4

I don't think that's grammatical. よくありませんでした or よくなかったです would be right.

 

KiaiFighter

後輩

29 Aug 2012

4

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• 31 Aug 2012

• #5

yeah, i wrote that just correcting the kana itself without thinking.
technically it should be よくなかったです。