Paragraphes to translate

kevinsano · 21 Feb 2005

I think I know what these sentences mean, but there are too many words I don't know. can someone help me out.

２／１４みんなそわそわ

今日はバレンタイン・ディ。
学校では好きな子にプレゼントを贈って告白しようとする子や、
ママに焼いてもらったチョコレートブラウニーをクラス全員に
配ってまわる子だとか、
お気に入りの仲間を呼んでパーティを開く子だとかがいて、
みんな朝からそわそわしていた。
わたしはそんな騒ぎにはいつも馴染めなくて、
みんなの姿が遠くに見えてた。

隣の席のアンナは、パパにプレゼントあげたらパパがどれくらい
感激したかって話を一日中繰り返してた。
わたしにもパパがいたら、そんなことしたりするかなって
ちょっと思ったりもしたけど、でもいたとしても、
きっと今日のアンナみたいにパパのこと、
みんなに自慢したりはしないだろうって、思ったりもした。

学校の帰りにふと思いついて、
小さなマーガレットの花束を買って帰った。
キッチンのテーブルに飾っておいたら、
ジェシカがとっても喜んでくれた。うれしかった。

okaeri_man · 22 Feb 2005

is it just the fact that there's too many words you don't know...? try using this

Elizabeth · 22 Feb 2005

kevinsano said:
I think I know what these sentences mean, but there are too many words I don't know. can someone help me out.

２／１４みんなそわそわ

今日はバレンタイン・ディ。
学校では好きな子にプレゼントを贈って告白しようとする子や、
ママに焼いてもらったチョコレートブラウニーをクラス全員に
配ってまわる子だとか、
お気に入りの仲間を呼んでパーティを開く子だとかがいて、
みんな朝からそわそわしていた。

Today is Valentines Day.
It is the child that, along with their mother, baked and distributed chocolate brownies to the entire class and tried to confess to giving her favorite classmate a present, the child that threw the party and called her friends, which everyone had been nervous about since this morning ?

The remainder may go on and explain all about this child....I didn't read all the way through, maybe someone else can take the ball from here -- and correct mine while you're at it. :sorry:

Glenn · 22 Feb 2005

My impression was:

"Today is Valentine's Day. At school there are kids who will try to confess (their love) by giving presents to the ones they like, kids who will give out chocolate brownies that their moms made to everyone in the class, and kids who will throw parties and invite their closest friends. Everyone has been fidgety since this morning."

隣の席のアンナは、パパにプレゼントあげたらパパがどれくらい
感激したかって話を一日中繰り返してた。
わたしにもパパがいたら、そんなことしたりするかなって
ちょっと思ったりもしたけど、でもいたとしても、
きっと今日のアンナみたいにパパのこと、
みんなに自慢したりはしないだろうって、思ったりもした。

"Anna, the girl who sits next to me, has been repeating all day how impressed her papa will be when she gives him his present. If I had a papa, I think I would think things like that too, but even so, I also think that I surely wouldn't go on bragging to everyone about it like Anna."

Who's up next?

Glenn · 22 Feb 2005

Ah, what the hell, I've already gone through it all anyway.

学校の帰りにふと思いついて、
小さなマーガレットの花束を買って帰った。
キッチンのテーブルに飾っておいたら、
ジェシカがとっても喜んでくれた。うれしかった。

On my way home from school I thought of my wife*, and bought a small bouquet of marguerites. I arranged them on the kitchen table, and Jessica was very happy. I was glad."

Alright, so that was a weak ending, but I think it served its purpose.

* I'm assuming that that ふ is 婦.

It seems a bit weird that a grown man would be in class with children. I think I'm missing something here. :? Maybe my assumption was wrong. Or maybe it's a college class. Context would be helpful here, and I would certainly feel better if I knew who this guy was.

epigene · 22 Feb 2005

Glenn said:
Ah, what the hell, I've already gone through it all anyway.

On my way home from school I thought of my wife*, and bought a small bouquet of marguerites. I arranged them on the kitchen table, and Jessica was very happy. I was glad."

Alright, so that was a weak ending, but I think it served its purpose.

* I'm assuming that that ふ is 婦.

It seems a bit weird that a grown man would be in class with children. I think I'm missing something here. :? Maybe my assumption was wrong.

Glenn, your translation is excellent, except for the one marked with *.

ふと思う： To think for a fleeting instant; to be inspired suddenly.

The person gave the flowers to Jessica, whoever it is, who lives at his/her home.

PS Thank you for translating my post in the Todai thread

Glenn · 22 Feb 2005

Ah, thank you, epigene! I had figured that it might be an onomatopoeia, but didn't find one listed when I checked the dicitonary. And I didn't mind doing the translation at all in the Todai thread. I just hope I got it how you wanted it. The last thing I want to do is misrepresent someone else's words.

Elizabeth · 22 Feb 2005

Glenn said:
My impression was:

"Today is Valentine's Day. At school there are kids who will try to confess (their love) by giving presents to the ones they like, kids who will give out chocolate brownies that their moms made to everyone in the class, and kids who will throw parties and invite their closest friends. Everyone has been fidgety since this morning."

Thanks, Glenn ! That makes it more like a real class. I should have realized the "ya" in 子やママに was there to divide the two clauses, not connect 'mothers and their children' as a single unit.

Glenn · 22 Feb 2005

Heh, I must have eaten my Wheaties today, I guess. Well, aside from the whole ふと思う thing...

kevinsano · 22 Feb 2005

actually, it was the long sentences combined with the words I don't know. Sorry, I forgot to give the context....

it's part of a diary of a girl who lives with her aunt(jessica), that would explain what she's doing in a class with children... sorry again.

学校の帰りにふと思いついて、
小さなマーガレットの花束を買って帰った。
キッチンのテーブルに飾っておいたら、
ジェシカがとっても喜んでくれた。うれしかった。

this part confused me the most. I thought it was "I thought of little margaret, who bought a bouquet of flowers", but I didn't notice the "wo" particle. I do that often.

ふと思う = 不図思う right?

thanks again.

kevinsano · 22 Feb 2005

隣の席のアンナは、パパにプレゼントあげたらパパがどれくらい
感激したかって話を一日中繰り返してた。
わたしにもパパがいたら、そんなことしたりするかなって
ちょっと思ったりもしたけど、でもいたとしても、
きっと今日のアンナみたいにパパのこと、
みんなに自慢したりはしないだろうって、思ったりもした。

I translated this as:

the girl in the seat next to me was going over how she was going to praise her father when she gives him his present the whole day long, If I had a father too I probably would be proud as well, but I don't think I would brag like that.

epigene · 22 Feb 2005

kevinsano said:
隣の席のアンナは、パパにプレゼントあげたらパパがどれくらい
感激したかって話を一日中繰り返してた。
わたしにもパパがいたら、そんなことしたりするかなって
ちょっと思ったりもしたけど、でもいたとしても、
きっと今日のアンナみたいにパパのこと、
みんなに自慢したりはしないだろうって、思ったりもした。

I translated this as:

the girl in the seat next to me was going over how she was going to praise her father when she gives him his present all day, If I had a father too I probably would be proud too, but I don't think I would brag like that.

As you asking if this translation is right? I have mentioned earlier that Glenn's translation is right. :?

ふと思う = 不図思う right?

Yes, but it is no longer common to write the phrase in kanji. Generally speaking, it is not appropriate to replace everything with kanji in the rules of modern Japanese usage.

kevinsano · 22 Feb 2005

I know that, but I was just wondering. I've never seen words like suru and futo in kanji before, but it's always nice to know.

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kevinsano

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okaeri_man

Tadaima!

Elizabeth

先輩

Glenn

一切皆苦

Glenn

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epigene

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Glenn

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Elizabeth

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Glenn

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kevinsano

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kevinsano

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