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gwendy85

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Hi guys!

I need a little more help in translating for my novel. Here it is:

First Setting: WWII Battlefield
(Soldier, calling out to his compatriots to stop them from firing)
Everyone! Stop firing! It's me! Matsushima!

Hold your fire! (military man, commanding his subordinates)

And this one's just in a setting where there are a lot of crying (grief)
Darling, I love you (as in husband to wife or vice versa)

ARIGATO!!!
 
1)
Everyone! Stop firing! It's me. Matsushima!
貴様ら!撃つのをやめんか!俺だ!松嶋だ!
kisamara! utsuno wo yamenka! ore da! Matsushima da!
2)
Hold your fire!
撃ち方やめ!
uchikata yame!
3)
Darling, I love you.
The translation would be different depending on the situation.
Could you explain more precisely the setting?
 

Thank you so much, MorenoKatoh! I never thought anyone would ever respond!

Anyway, I'd just like it if you translate 'Darling' for me, as in a pet name between husband and wife. Is it Hanata? Or something? Heard it in Ranma 1/2
 
I would like to make certain what you mean by 'hold your fire'.
Do you mean by that 'cease the fire'? If not, I would be sorry for having made a mistake
and like to ask you to inform me of another expression for 'hold your fire' to obtain a correct translation.
Rumiko Takahashi, the author of Ramma 1/2 had been using the word 'Darling'
in one of her anime works 'Urusei yatsura' (the englich version: 'Lum', 'Lum returns')
without translating it into japanese to call her allegedly fiance Ataru Morboshi.
I think therefore it appropriate not to translate this 'Darling' into japanese.
You would pronounce 'daarin'.
 
The use of あなた can be darling between a married or close couple. It was used a lot in "Ai Yori Aoshi" in Kaoru's dreams.
 
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