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kamuizero

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Hello everyone, I'm doing some sentences and I came up with this one, I don't know if this is correct, so I ask your help please : what I want to say is :"A scary phantom is seen from the window".

・ まどから、こわなまぼろしがみえる.

Is this correct :?
 
まどのむこうに、ゆうれいがみえる。

Phantom can be translated as:
ゆうれい: Ghost, as in spirit of a dead person
おばけ: Ghost, as a frightening monster
まぼろし: Mirage
げんえい: Illusion

Take your pick!
 

hey thnx! but why the " むこうに " ?? is kara wrong??? =S, and what does "まぼろし" is used for I thought i could use it there hehe
 
kamuizero said:
hey thnx! but why the " むこうに " ?? is kara wrong??? =S, and what does "まぼろし" is used for =P??? I thought i could use it there hehe
Phantom can be interpreted in many ways in Japanese, so I just listed the possibilities. If it's mirage, "maboroshi" is OK.

"--kara" is used to suggest "movement from a certain direction." It's the speaker who "sees" something through the window, so it's "mukou ni," suggesting the location of the object beyond the window.
 
Perhaps scary-looking is better than just scary :? There are various ways to frame it I'm sure, but does this make sense as one ?

まどのむこうに恐ろしい姿をした幻がみえる
 
Thank you, Elizabeth!

I forgot to put in "kowai." Yes, "osoroshii" is scarier...
 
epigene said:
Thank you, Elizabeth!

I forgot to put in "kowai." Yes, "osoroshii" is scarier...
I know I would more frightened of a 恐ろしい幽霊 than a 姿の幽霊(幻), Epigene....but it is a matter of personal taste in the end.
 
Hey thnx for the improvements to the sentence =P but there is one thing I don't understand =S, the part : "oroshiisugata wo shita maboroshi" =S does it means something like : The specter with a dreadful shape?? Y_Y
 
I thought I was saying the 'specter with an appearance that was frightening (or, frightened me).....
 
Well kind of hehe, what I'm trying to say is " A Scary/dreadful Phantom is seen through the window" The person is inside the room, and if he looks the window there is a phatom at the other side of the window (outside the house) =P
 
kamuizero said:
Well kind of hehe, what I'm trying to say is " A Scary/dreadful Phantom is seen through the window" The person is inside the room, and if he looks the window there is a phatom at the other side of the window (outside the house) =P
I understand perfectly....it's just that in English it was my opinion that "frightful looking" has a more natural ring, depending how strongly you believe the phantom to be an actual being I suppose....
 
I thought kara could also be used to specify the cause and effect

ゆうべはしずかからよくねることができた。
because last night was quiet I was able to sleep well.
Is this not correct?
 

夕べは静か*だった*からよく寝られました。

is fine. I'm not sure why @epigene didn't like kamuizero's "mado kara"; I suspect it has something to do with the fact that "mado kara" sort of sounds like you are *inside* the window... maybe 窓のそばからゆうれいが見える would be better

epigeneさんへ:「自分の位置から何かが見える」というのは文法的に間違いはないと思っていましたけど、違うんですか?
 
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Mado kara is a common enough expression I suppose from the car or train or something -- I don't think you need to be inside it. "Through the window" or "out the window" does come off as more natural to me in English, though, "from the window" sounds like you're limited by your vantage point, as if hindered from getting another perspective on it.
 
CorDarei and Elizabeth's discussions on "--kara" and "--no mukou ni" had me thinking hard... until I lost confidence in what I posted and sought my husband's advice (trained as Japanese language (kokugo & kanbun) teacher on the high school level). He agrees that "--kara" is awkward in this case.

"Mado kara mieru" would be used when the person is actively looking out the window, probably in search of something specific or interesting. "Mado no mukou ni mieru" describes a situation in which the person unexpectantly sees something through the window.

Hope this explains it! (Whew, relieved that I was correct )

PS Do I see "mojibake" on CorDarei's post? Am I the only one? I saw mojibake in one of Nagashima-san's post when he was writing in Japanese only (in zenkaku). He was aware of the mojibake problem, and it still happened in his post! Anybody have an answer?
 
I'm viewing in SHift-JIS, and see no mojibake.

Just to throw my two cents in, "mado kara" just reminds me of someone looking out to check the weather.
 
Shift-JISを使っても、部分的に文字化けしていて分かりません。
 

Thanks for the explanation. I think I get what you mean now.


I don't have an answer, but my post is definitely mojibake-ed. I just didn't want to write the whole thing in zenkaku eimoji. (For the record, it just mojibaked the 窶堋、s; the affected words were "iu" and "chigau")
 
GaijinPunch said:
I'm viewing in SHift-JIS, and see no mojibake.

Just to throw my two cents in, "mado kara" just reminds me of someone looking out to check the weather.
Thanks for the info! Actually, I'm viewing in Shift-JIS, too, but still see the mojibake. :?

I'm using Firefox 1.0 on Windows XP Pro (E). I usually don't have the "language for non-Unicode programs" on Japanese because of certain English-native software I'm using. Is this the cause? Do you have any suggestions on setup?
 
It seems that the mojibake was there for two reasons: 1) not using the zenkaku eiji, and 2) placing a space between the colon and the bracket. When I changed those two things, the mojibake disappeared.

epigene said:
...sought my husband's advice (trained as Japanese language (kokugo & kanbun) teacher on the high school level).

Wow, he's trained in kanbun? I'd like to know how to read that stuff, but it seems to be a graduate level course at most universities. I think it would make reading Nihon Shoki and Kojiki a much richer experience than getting it translated, kind of like knowing Old English would probably make reading "Beowulf" a richer experience, and knowing Greek for "The Illyad" and "The Odyssey," etc.

[Edit] I just realized this, and it surprised me: they teach kanbun at the high school level?! I wouldn't have thought that was high school level material, but I guess it's different when your native language is Japanese.

[Edit 2] I wanted to mention that I'm viewing in Shift-JIS and using Firefox.
 
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