Made a drawing for MY FIRST STORY

[Achilles 1-1]

Tell me if it's good! This took about an hour and a half. (Yes, my katakana and kanji writing is terrible, I know, I need to work on it.

 

[Toritoribe]

The only obvious mistake is the long vowel mark "ー" in アンダーグラウンド. The line becomes vertical when writing vertically.


By the way, what do you mean by 無告? The dictionary says that this word really exists, but it's very uncommon. (I've never heard it before.)

 

[Achilles 1-1]

The only obvious mistake is the long vowel mark "ー" in アンダーグラウンド. The line becomes vertical when writing vertically.
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By the way, what do you mean by 無告? The dictionary says that this word really exists, but it's very uncommon. (I've never heard it before.)

Oh, it's a song. All of those are songs by them. Mukoku (無告) is one of their most popular songs.