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When I shop, that comes sudden, urgent or more like a need running away from this giant cog of time that quashes my brain and almost conquers my soul freeing what left like a wandering thought in a clear space but looking for a sudden baby cloud to hang onto! .
When I shop, usually without knowing what I need except that I need it.
When I do, I loop into circles; my eyes are on the move through objects, colors, prices and people, but plain like a broken piece of cold Marble.!
I notice the same shelf, filled with these discounted healthy boxes, more than once.!
I do leave these circles wondering how long wos I stuck on them, carrying heavy question mark: why that kid is gazing at me with shock on his eyes.?!
I go through the butcher's corner and I myself stock in the gazing mood but at a bulk of beef, soon I move when I realize that I got tense suddenly.
Then, I found myself almost flying in a sleepy mood caught by the aroma of coffee, I thank the, usually, old lady who offers a cup, and I smile while almost drinkin it through my nose!
When I do, I go into an adventure like, and I buy more than three types of bread, I pack the basket with more than a whole house full of children need of biscuits and chocolate and forget what exactly brought me here!
Mint has something in it, finding myself surrounded by vegetable, I smile when I get confident it is the awakening essence in the leaves. I move in sudden, like when I was born! towards fruits, looking for apples. Green ones!
 
Greetings goma san !! I really like that piece of art; is it yours? 👍 :-)
 
Mike Cash said:
I think the OP has a good chance of winning the Bulwer-Lytton Contest.
Home | The Bulwer Lytton Fiction Contest

That's hilarious! :LOL:
I might enter for that...

I have to admit, I will look at shopping differently now. I might also attempt drinking coffee (almost) through my nose, in the (probably forlorn) hope that in getting it more immediately into my bloodstream, I will be (possibly) inspired to caffeine-intoxicated flights of literary greatness. And who cares if my workmates look at me oddly? 😏
 
]-wandering-raven-[ said:
"oy ,and I thought my thought as psychopath were odd.."
Captain Jack Sparrow, no one owes a blood debt to the legendary Davey Jones except him.
No time to spare raven.!!
move that steering wheel.
Lets sail.!
 
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Kinsao said:
I love that picture! 😍
It's like fingerprints, or wood...
Mars Man said:
Greetings goma san !! I really like that piece of art; is it yours? 👍 :-)
It is a beauty. One of Vladimir Kush's called current : Click here, softly please.!
but aa..aah you aint gonna trick me.!
Horizon is calling..
Ladies and gents fasten your seat belts..
we are sailing to Mars.!
 
That last picture... --> 😍

goma-san, you are out there, but in a good way... :giggle:
 
Kinsao said:
That's hilarious! :LOL:
I might enter for that...
I have to admit, I will look at shopping differently now. I might also attempt drinking coffee (almost) through my nose, in the (probably forlorn) hope that in getting it more immediately into my bloodstream, I will be (possibly) inspired to caffeine-intoxicated flights of literary greatness. And who cares if my workmates look at me oddly? 😏
Tsuyoiko said:
This guy is bad too: http://www.mcgonagall-online.org.uk/
I hate shopping. I have a list of what I want to buy, and that is all I buy. If I browse, I always feel like the shopkeeper is not going to let me leave until I buy something.
Click here.!
 
Kinsao said:
That last picture... --> 😍
goma-san, you are out there, but in a good way... :giggle:

I am everywhere at the moment after being squeezed for ages inside a lamp.!
I enjoyed, Gold Miner: Vegas, very much.

LETS SAIL!!!
 
Classic! :LOL: I love those...

(... mind you, the contributors to that site obviously haven't come across the phenomenen of 'fanfiction' yet... most of that is truly appalling... :sick: )

Edit: what a relief to be free of your lamp! 😎
 
Some nice links there folks !! Thanks. Yes, let's take a trip to Mars, and enjoy the Dadaism on that long time friend of Earth !!

Well, I thought about that ]-wandering-raven-[ san. . . but figured the ship was a she, so, just pipe dreaming...?

I'd love to hear and see more goma san !! :-)
 
]-wandering-raven-[ said:
"so nobody notices he's giving the boat head?"

Are you referring to your avatar?
 
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