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Is what I wrote correct?

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It's a long one, sorry! But I'd like to know if my use of Japanese is correct here. I'm only a beginner, so I'm not very good!
I used the respectful term "です" and the normal term "だ".


こんにちは!BreakingThroughです. 今日はにをするです. そうしょね! 日本語を話すことができじゃないだ. でも, 練習がんばります!​

I'm trying to write "今日はにをするです" as today "I'm doing lesson two." Not sure if what I wrote was correct.

先一昨日は水曜日でした. ベリーダンスだった. 7時から, 9時までだよ. 先生はおもしろくて楽しい. それによいじゃないだ. じゃあ, クラスはおもしろくて悪いすよ!

今, 8時だよ. 日本語がおもしろい! 勉強すればするほどおもしろいよ! でも, 易しくないだ.

じゃあ, 私はそろそろ~

まだね~~​


I do have a question! Do I use "は" in every sentence? Or, like, "が"?

Thanks so much to those who took their time reading! ありがとう~~~
 
今日はにをするです.
The polite form of する is します, and not するです.
The hiragana に doesn't make much sense. At least it should be 2. レッスン2 is the best.

そうしょね!
?

日本語を話すことができじゃないだ.
The negative of できる is できない, and not できじゃない.
Another form of the potential negative of 話す is 話せない.

先一昨日
? maybe 一昨日(the day before yesterday)?

それによいじゃないだ.
The negative of よい is よくない, and not よいじゃない.

じゃあ, クラスはおもしろくて悪いすよ!
?

まだね


I do have a question! Do I use "は" in every sentence? Or, like, "が"?
See the thread linked below.

は, が and を what's the difference between the following sentences? | Japan Forum
 
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