Did I translate these lyrics correctly?

Goude · 2 Jan 2012

I have been studying Japanese for a bit on my own and wanted to confirm if I had translated the lyrics correctly. It's a fun thing to do while learning, I think.
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Ninny 気まぐれな Ninny
寂しい日は僕の名前呼ぶのさ
Ninny 優しい Ninny
一度だけ悲しい嘘をついたけど
Ninny 気まぐれな Ninny
少しづつ君は大人になって
Ninny 優しい Ninny
一つだけ夢を失くした夜に
Ninny
本当は
涙も声も出さず
Ninny
泣いていたね
Ninny
本当さ
キミが誰のものでも
たぶん不安じゃない
あの気持ちは色褪せない
思い出して振り向くたびに
震えるほど
恋してたNinny
Ninny 気まぐれな Ninny
Ninny 優しい Ninny
Ninny さよなら Ninny
Ninny
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Ninny, Whimsical Ninny
On a lonely day, called my name
Ninny, Kind-hearted Ninny
Just once told a lie, but felt bad afterwards
Ninny, Whimsical Ninny
Just a little, you will grow older
Ninny, Kind-hearted Ninny
A single dream lost at night (this one is giving me tons of trouble and I am pretty sure it's wrong)
Ninny
Honestly,
I cried and shouted my voice hoarse (this one is pretty flakey too)
Ninny
I cried a lot.
Ninny
Really,
(No idea what this line is talking about)
Maybe you weren't scared
And maybe these feelings will fade
I remember every time I look back
Just trembling
I loved you, Ninny
Ninny, Whimsical Ninny
Ninny, Kind-hearted Ninny
Ninny, So long, Ninny
Ninny

Toritoribe · 3 Jan 2012

You need to interpret correctly who the subject of the verb is, which tense the verb is in, which noun the clause is modifying, what fanction the adjective performs(attributive or predicative), etc. etc...

Did I translate these lyrics correctly?

Goude

後輩

Toritoribe

松葉解禁

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