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[Elizabeth]

Shouldn't 踏む have を if they are stepping on cherry blossoms? I don't understand the に. And isn't 男の子が better？

を is correct. I think 彼ら was used for both the boy and girl.

 

[KrazyKat]

を is correct. I think 彼ら was used for both the boy and girl.

Sorry, I meant 男の子が not 男の子は in the first sentence.

 

[Tomii515]

Shouldn't 踏む have を if they are stepping on cherry blossoms? I don't understand the に. And isn't 男の子が better？

Anyway,
突然（とつぜん）化け物が現れました（あらわれました）。

ummm, ok, there is no goblin in the story we started....we started a new one...and did you read the directions? you have to make it so if can only be 3 people per sentence...not less, not more, but exactly 3 people....that's what makes this game more challenging...(well not really.....)

 

[Tomii515]

女の子（おんなのこ）と 男の子（おとこのこ）は に わとりを。。。

 

[epigene]

女の子（おんなのこ）と 男の子（おとこのこ）は にわとりに。。。

「たすけて」と、おねがいしましたが、
...asked for help but...

Edit: @Tomii
I thought you meant no more than 3 persons.

 

[Tomii515]

「たすけて」と、おねがいしました。

何を 言っていますか。

if you're playing the game, you have to make the middle of the sentence...u cant finish it because ur only the 2nd person to go...

if you not playing, what did u say?

 

[Tomii515]

「たすけて」と、おねがいしましたが、
...asked for help but...
Edit: @Tomii
I thought you meant no more than 3 persons.

I'm not sure what to put...even though you told me what it say...im afraid i might put the wrong thing...

 

[Tomii515]

「たすけて」と、おねがいしましたが、
...asked for help but...
Edit: @Tomii
I thought you meant no more than 3 persons.

I'm not sure what to put...even though you told me what it say...im afraid i might put the wrong thing...

would this sentence bu ok "The girl and the boy asked the chicken for help but the chicken said no." would i just have to put...

。。。にわとりを ゛いいえ゛に 言いました（いいました）。

 

[undrentide]

would this sentence bu ok
"The girl and the boy asked the chicken for help but the chicken said no."
would i just have to put...
。。。にわとりは 「いいえ」と 言いました（いいました）。

男の子は 石を ひろって...
（おとこのこは いしを ひろって...）

 

[Tomii515]

男の子は 石を ひろって...
（おとこのこは いしを ひろって...）

。。。にわとりの 頭（あたま）に。。。

 

[doinkies]

投げました。そして、にわとりは・・・

 

[Kyoko_desu]

コケコッコーと、一声（ひとこえ）鳴いて、倒れました（たおれまし た）。

 

[Tomii515]

コケコッコーと、一声（ひとこえ）鳴いて、倒れました（たおれました）。

you're only the second person in the sentence....u cant finish it...and plus, you have too many words

 

[KrazyKat]

Edit: @Tomii
I thought you meant no more than 3 persons.

Me too. Sorry Tommy.

コケコッコーと、一声（ひとこえ）鳴いて、倒れました（たおれました）。

女の子が「何をしちゃったの！？」と

 

[Tomii515]

Me too. Sorry Tommy.
女の子が「何をしちゃったの！？」と

Can you start a new sentence that starts after Doinkies...Kyoko_desu finished the sentence on the 2nd person and used 4 words... she's not on, so she cany finx it, so skip over her...

 

[KrazyKat]

If we just count kyoko's part as two two-word parts then we should be fine right? If not, then I would follow doinkies with:
コケコッコーと、一声（ひとこえ）

 

[Tomii515]

Are you saying "...****-a-doodle-doo cried the chicken...."

 

[KrazyKat]

Well, I would translate kyoko's sentence as 'the chicken let out a squawk and collapsed on the ground.'

 

[Elizabeth]

Let's get back to the ghost story idea....

毎晩 , 恐 ( お ) ろしい 幽霊 ( ゆうれい ) は

 

[Tomii515]

コケコッコーと、一声（ひとこえ）

鳴いて、倒れました（たおれまし た）。

 

[KrazyKat]

鳴いて、倒れました（たおれまし た）。

女の子が「何をしちゃったの！？」と

Let's get back to the ghost story idea....:evil:
毎晩 , 恐 ( おそ ) ろしい 幽霊 ( ゆうれい ) は

この村（むら）の人たちを

 

[epigene]

女の子が「何をしちゃったの！？」と
驚（おどろ）いて、叫（さけ）び、
(...shouted in surprise...)


@Elizabeth & KrazyKat:
This is Tomii's thread. He announced that there had been a change in the story line when it veered off course.

If you want a ghost thread, I think you should start a new thread to keep this thread simple for people to follow.

 

[Elizabeth]

女の子が「何をしちゃったの！？」と
驚（おどろ）いて、叫（さけ）び、
(...shouted in surprise...)
@Elizabeth & KrazyKat:
This is Tomii's thread. He announced that there had been a change in the story line when it veered off course.
If you want a ghost thread, I think you should start a new thread to keep this thread simple for people to follow.

OK, fair enough. I was assuming the chicken idea was down to its final
goodbye, but we'll wait and see how the plot thickens from here before restarting anything too scary or complicated.

 

[Tomii515]

ok...im confused....what does "しちゃったの" mean? grrr....this is getting confusing....oh, and epigene, thank you, but i don't want it to be "my" forum, but a game forum, like the shiritori or w/e game...If they want to start a new story they can....This chicken story is getting really confusing...ok, lets start over only 1 more time (lol), and this time stick with this story...oh, and make sure you read the directions. if someone doesn't do the right thing for the game, we are just gonna skip their post like it wasn't there...

ok, whoever post the next beginning, starts the new story. We will do the story until we feel it need to finish...ok...here we go! (again XD)

 

[KrazyKat]

ok...im confused....what does "しちゃったの" mean? grrr....this is getting confusing...

Things done unintentionally - Tae Kim's Japanese grammar guide
何をしちゃったの！？ What have you done!

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