Need romaji translation for these please (FINAL, most important!)

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well guys, this is the final script i need a translation for. this is it, after this its time to commence my little thing i have been working on for a long time. hopefully i will become successful.
can you translate this into japanese romaji please? im asking with 10000% of my heart and please please please just help me if you know you can, dont think this is useless and its for nothing because it is for something!! something very important. something in the future might come back to you and you will remember this if this all goes well, i promise! (yes i wrote this script by myself)

ty! ty ty ty! here it is, oh and please feel free to translate half then go back on it the next day or something, or at least translate the easiest or shortest lines if you want. and uhh, if you dont know how to translate a word in one of the lines just do the best you can, i don't need 100% correct romaji but i need the best of it you can offer!



1) Ooshiro Chiisu
2) 17 years old.
3) After being forcefully sent to earth,
4) he has bet on his life that he will come back for his love, Athena.
5) In the other world, he had a family of five people.
6) His mother Ibaraki Suzune.
7) His father Ooshiro Kado.
8) His younger sister Ooshiro Tomoko.
9) His older brother Ooshiro Taro.
10) And his younger brother Ooshiro Mikio.
11) He had a lover that he would never leave...
12) After their village was invaded by their neighbor, "White Village",
13) Everyone in the family was split apart after there was an arguement from
his father and mother.
14) The younger sister Tomoko was surrounded in flames and disappeared
after the invasion.
15) The mother, Suzune died protecting the youngest child in the family.
16) The youngest child was kidnapped by the White Village.
17) The father escaped with his son Taro and used a forbidden technique
to safely, send Chiisu to a place called Earth.
18) Chiisu's father had no hope to support him because Chiisu was a huge failure.
19) and would not see him live in a world where war and violence is neverending.
20) Ooshiro Chiisu.
21) It has been 4 years.
22) his deepest mission, is to come back to his world for those that loved him.
23) and to unify with Athena once again.


yes there is more story to all of this, but this is just a door and a road to the bigger part, but this commences it all.
if something doesn't make sense you can tell me and ill change it i guess.. like the names or something. (those names i have chosen have meanings to it as well and goes in the story later on, lol told ya there will be story to all of this but this is just the beginning) ty again!

and btw, this whole script goes in order. just pretend its some guy telling a story or something.
 
Although you may have received help the last time, you will notice if you read other threads here that this is not a translation service but a forum for helping each other learn the Japanese language.

Please work on the translation yourself first. :eek:
 
Yeah but I dont have enough time to learn this all in time, I have to do this before "that" time comes, so plz just help this last time. I said it once and ill say it again, i ask deep inside with all my heart.
and i can learn some stuff by getting translations. i had no idea japanese had to make sense like in a strict way and needed context and all that before . i thought it was just as easy as english where you can just bust out words out of no where and still makes sense by logic/reason/commonsense or w/e
ill start learning after i get done with this whole thing, i have to hurry.
Help, please?
 
i had no idea japanese had to make sense like in a strict way and needed context and all that before . i thought it was just as easy as english where you can just bust out words out of no where and still makes sense by logic/reason/commonsense or w/e

You're using the above as an example of what you DID learn? Are you out of your mind? The above is completely wrong. Especially about the English part. Especially about the Japanese part. :eek:
 
Ok... how are they wrong?

Okay, it is obvious that no one is going to do the translation for you, so why not just hire someone for the job since, by the way you have described it, it is a part of a project that is VERY important and BIG!

As far as I am concerned, when someone says "Help me out with a translation for a very important project which is going to change the world!" without giving me any details as to what the project actually IS, I get a little suspicious.

Anyway, I am sorry you didn't get any help and I wish you luck in whatever it is that you're trying to do.
 
Alright. You wished me luck. I'll be mature and say thanks anyway and leave this here.
It takes a while to hire someone that would be sticking around with me for a while, and reason why I put a topic here is cause I said this was needed a.s.a.p
Thanks once again...
 
Alright. You wished me luck. I'll be mature and say thanks anyway and leave this here.
It takes a while to hire someone that would be sticking around with me for a while, and reason why I put a topic here is cause I said this was needed a.s.a.p
Thanks once again...
That's why you need to deal with the real pros this time. Think like 2 months in advance in the future and maybe someone will be willing to help with one every couple days...If you are friendly with other Japanese boards, too, you can always farm yourself out for free there first. :p
 
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