: A spectacularly good summary of the major issues and evolution of the Ashikaga shogunate. Very substantial text, yet it flows remarkably well.
: One single small flaw: an unclear sentence without predicate, at the end of the text. "For instance, the occupation of Kyōto by Oda Yoshiaki, who was destined to be the last of the Ashikaga shoguns." What is this example supposed to exemplify? There is no link clear with the previous paragraph, yet a logical connection is assumed by the connector "for instance".
Also, I would appreciate a reference for the image of the warrior included in Gallery.
This text can compete with any professional encyclopedia.
