just regarding the issue of transliteration, there are a few different conventions, but none of them seem to provide any solid guidelines for spacing. English being my first language, I prefer to use Hepburn if I must write in Romaji, as it seems to come closest to the sounds in Japanese, and I place spaces generously (ie not combining particles and words, even breaking down 四文字熟語 or larger compounds into multiple parts). If I'm using IME on a computer, however, I'll use another convention to cut down on the number of keystrokes, as it all comes out the same way.
As has been pointed out, there are two glaring mistakes in the originally posted material: one is a transliteration mistake, and the other is a mistake in the Japanese itself.