I can't say whether this is natural or not, but based on the rest of the passage what exactly has happened in the past to make the oku strange ?Hi everyone, I've got a couple of things here I just couldn't seem to work out.
First is the use of the nonpast tense used when telling events that happened in the past. Here is an example of what I am talking about:
ランプに似た燭台を机のうえにおく。 さらに水の入った桶をおいた。
Could someone please help explain why the first oku is not in the past and what the significance of this is?
The surface of the earth had been trying to restore itself to a more natural state of forestation, maybe ? It's difficult to say properly in Japanese with a more limited use of reflexive pronouns compared with English.The second problem I have is with the volitional + to suru form. Normally I don't have a problem with this. However I have seen this used when it doesn't seem possible for something to be 'trying':
森にいま地表は静かに覆われようとしていた。
I believe sugiru is always the intransitive form. This may be a wild guess but looks to me like "after two months had passed" in the context of something happening at the end of "two months having passed....".This one's from memory so it might not be right:
二ヶ月が過ぎようとした
(also is sugiru transitive or intransitive I'm getting a bit confused there)
Thanks for any help!
Elizabeth said:I can't say whether this is natural or not, but based on the rest of the passage what exactly has happened in the past to make the oku strange ?
Thanks, I can see that one now.Elizabeth said:The surface of the earth had been trying to restore itself to a more natural state of forestation, maybe ? It's difficult to say properly in Japanese with a more limited use of reflexive pronouns compared with English.
Elizabeth said:I believe sugiru is always the intransitive form. This may be a wild guess but looks to me like "after two months had passed" in the context of something happening at the end of "two months having passed...." :?
It would also make sense if this were a sequence of two actions first involving the candle then the bucket that has just gotten split up into two sentences.I understood it as she put the candle on the table and then put the bucket on the table. Both sentences happened in the past and yet in the japanese the first isn't in the past tense. I was thinking along the lines of maybe the action wasn't complete at that point in the story and actually both objects were put down at the same time? So it couldn't used oita since that would imply the candle was put down first? Perhaps?
I wouldn't call it strange because a lot of actions in a passage written in the past seem to use this nonpast tense, I just don't understand why they do. :?
There are special cases of this happening with other 'pseudo-transitive' verbs as well, like "川を泳ぎます"、"公園を歩きます" which have a weird sort of in between status even to grammarians. The best thing to do I suppose is just think of 11時を過ぎると as a little past 11, not that as 11 having past itself.I thought sugiru is intransitive too, but then get confused when I see it take a direct object:
11時を過ぎると
The translations you gave fit, however, I don't see why (or how) the sentence used 'you to shita' and not just sugita.
"You to shite iru" used intransitively then doesn't signify a failured effort, or trying without success ("to shita ga" in contrast to "mimashita")....or so at least it would appear from these examples.Mike Cash said:Though it sounds odd to our ears, time is often expressed with the volitional. NHK radio announcers when giving time signals often say things like 4時になろうとしています instead of 4時になります as we might think more natural.
叫んだ is probably in the past to show something has already happened before the scenery can pause or be interrupted. It's like 京都に行ったときに、写真Thanks for your help so far.
It does seem so strange to use the volitional for passage of time! Is this only used in certain situations?
I'm still lost on the use of the nonpast though. Here's another example:
(Context: girl is watching some kind of illusion)
陽子は思わず叫んだ。
叫んだとたんに風景が途切れる。 ふと我に返ったように...
So why togireru not togireta? I'm sure i'm just missing something really simple here. I'm sure would use the past to translate, it wouldn't we?
The shadow was no longer visible. I also can't hear the sound of water.Acually, here's an even better example:
もう影は見えなかった。 水の音も聞こえない。
I don't understand how these can be in different tenses?
You can think of it as an anthropomorphic use of the volitional case. Other possible examples:KrazyKat said:It does seem so strange to use the volitional for passage of time! Is this only used in certain situations?
Think of it as a kind of dramatic device. The first sentence sets the scene. Then the second one draws you into the "action" by using present tense to make it more immediate.I'm still lost on the use of the nonpast though. Here's another example:
(Context: girl is watching some kind of illusion)
陽子は思わず叫んだ。
叫んだとたんに風景が途切れる。 ふと我に返ったように...
So why togireru not togireta? I'm sure i'm just missing something really simple here. I'm sure would use the past to translate, it wouldn't we?
Actually, here's an even better example:
もう影は見えなかった。 水の音も聞こえない。
KrazyKat said:Hi everyone, I've got a couple of things here I just couldn't seem to work out.
First is the use of the nonpast tense used when telling events that happened in the past. Here is an example of what I am talking about:
ランプに似た燭台を机のうえにおく。 さらに水の入った桶をおいた。
Could someone please help explain why the first oku is not in the past and what the significance of this is?
The second problem I have is with the volitional + to suru form. Normally I don't have a problem with this. However I have seen this used when it doesn't seem possible for something to be 'trying':
森にいま地表は静かに覆われようとしていた。
This one's from memory so it might not be right:
二ヶ月が過ぎようとした
(also is sugiru transitive or intransitive i'm getting a bit confused there)
Thanks for any help!
GoldCoinLover said:I believe in past adjectives (i.e okii being big, past tense) you drop the 'i' and add 'ku' in some cases.
If I'm wrong, someone please correct me.
Thanks
KrazyKat said:back on topic, thanks for you help everyone. I think I might be beginning to get it. I think the problem is that I can't see how what seems to me to be a series of actions can be partly in the past tense and partly in the present tense. If I was writing it I would want to put all of the sentences into the past.
And it isn't only for negatives either. たとえば、KrazyKat said:What you are thinking about here, GCL, is making negatives.
samui - samuku arimasen - not cold
furui - furuku arimasen - not old
Doesn't this mean "the candle that looked like a lamp?"KrazyKat said:ランプに似た燭台
McCrutch67 said:Doesn't this mean "the candle that looked like a lamp?"
I thought that when a past tense verb came before a noun it described it as one that had done something or had had something done to it. But it seems like I'm wrong because nobody has said it. Is it? :?
That's the only way I have ever found it also. If you were going to use Nite iruKrazyKat said:ランプに似た燭台 candle resembling a lamp
曲がった道 a winding road
I think the past tense is used here with verbs like this to describe states or something. I don't really understand myself, I just kind of accepted this. Maybe someone else knows why they do this? I think its always 'nita something' though and not niru or niteiru.