A small doubt

nova

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If I wanna say: "let me feel the sweet pleasure of kill you" Is it correct to say: "kyou ni itooshii kibungayoi o korosu" in japanese?

 

Davey

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Why would you like to know this hahaha

 

yukio_michael

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Just like kanji tattoos, novelty Japanese never works out the way you think it should... odds are people wont know what you're trying to say, or think you're saying something meaningless...

Also, as said, unless you are personally going to voice the male character of some insane anime, why not start with something like, hajimemashite... infinitely more usefull japanese.

 

Elizabeth

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nova said:

If I wanna say: "let me feel the sweet pleasure of kill you" Is it correct to say: "kyou ni itooshii kibungayoi o korosu" in japanese?

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Where did this come from ??? It isn't even close to me...

 

nice gaijin

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babelfish?

 

Davey

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I only know "Yashinasu"

 

Kyoko_desu

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The translation

"let me feel the sweet pleasure of kill you"

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The translation is:
あなたを殺す甘美な喜びを感じさせてくれ。
(Anata wo korosu kanbi na yorokobi wo kanjisasete kure.)

• let me feel = kanji saseru
• kill = korosu
• sweet = kanbi na
• pleasure = yorokobi

By the way, is the original sentence grammatically correct?
Shouldn't I put "killing" instead "kill" after the preposition "of"???

 

Glenn

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No, it isn't, and yes, you're right. Your English is really good!

 

Kyoko_desu

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Thanx!

Arigatou gozaimasu. >Glenn

 

Elizabeth

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Kyoko_desu said:

The translation is:
あなたを殺す甘美な喜びを感じさせてくれ。
(Anata wo korosu kanbi na yorokobi wo kanjisasete kure.)

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As an English sentence, "kill" or "killing" is probably too standard or unslangy to be completely natural to a streetwise sadistic murderer. Some less straightforward phrases that might be used would be code terms like "let me have the pleasure of doing you in," "of knocking you off" "bumping you off" etc. and several more fortunately I'm totally unaware of.

The only more colloquial variation that's familiar in Japanese is 討って殺る（やる）
as a substitute for "korosu." (Less precise I know and the possibilities are broad as well, ranging from shoot, attack, bring down...). Any others that would work here ?

 

Glenn

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How about やる or やっちまう?

 

JimmySeal

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Nova was probably trying to express "Hazme sentir el placer dulce de matarte." And translated matar as "kill" instead of "killing."

Mejor que este frase permanezca en español, chico.

 

nova

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Dutch Baka said:

Why would you like to know this hahaha

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Cause a friend of mine asked but obviously I don't have the level to translate something like that.

nice gaijin said:

babelfish?

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Nah, but now that you point it out I tried with that one and I got: 私を殺害の甘い喜びを感じることを許可しなさい.

JimmySeal said:

Nova was probably trying to express "Hazme sentir el placer dulce de matarte."

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Actually in spanish was literally: "dejame sentir, el dulce placer de matarte".
thanx kyoko.

 

Davey

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Guess nobody knows Yashinasu.......

 

dreamer

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wuw oO
What's up with all the bloodlust? oO

 

Elizabeth

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Glenn said:

How about やる or やっちまう?

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私もそうは思いました。

でも、対応不足などから判断すると、快楽殺人者の場合は、「君を殺す」
という言葉みたいに感じするでしょうね。

甘美な喜び感じをもたらすから殺す精神異常者も多いというので、皆さん気をつけないといけませんね。

 

Kyoko_desu

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快楽殺人者の場合 は、「君を殺す」
という言葉みたいに感じするでしょうね。

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はい、Elizabethさん、私もそう感じました。
だから、あえてちょっときどった感じの口調に訳してみたんです。

 

Elizabeth

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Kyoko_desu said:

はい、Elizabethさん、私もそう感じました。
だから、あえてちょっときどった感じの口調に訳してみたんです。

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快楽殺人者なら「殺す」という言葉も平気で使うでしょうからね。