Satorian
devil's advocate
- 17 Apr 2004
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I mentioned having written a novel in some of the other threads and after having finished yet another revision feel like setting parts of it free and see whether there are people out there that remotely like it.
It's nothing special or of high literary merit, but at best fluffy poolside entertainment, should I have managed to achieve my goal.
Should you be bored at work, or looking for a bit of distraction, then you can find the novel's beginning at
http://oneamongmany.net/patterns.pdf
Of course I'd love to hear some comments, but please be honest if you indeed have a comment. If you want to do me a favour, be brutally honest. Otherwise it'd be hard to improve.
Thanks,
Mike
It's nothing special or of high literary merit, but at best fluffy poolside entertainment, should I have managed to achieve my goal.
Should you be bored at work, or looking for a bit of distraction, then you can find the novel's beginning at
http://oneamongmany.net/patterns.pdf
Of course I'd love to hear some comments, but please be honest if you indeed have a comment. If you want to do me a favour, be brutally honest. Otherwise it'd be hard to improve.
Thanks,
Mike