masterj
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I prefer #3. Note that your #1 is different from #2, #3, and #4. Also, I don't think you need or want the comma in there - although the conventions of punctuation might be different for Chinese. Bear in mind this is a Japanese forum, and you probably need the validation of the whole thing from a Chinese speaker.Just one more thing: I've tried different fonts that are available on internet with this text. Could anyone confirm that they are readable by normal people (who can read chinese) and that the meaning is still the same as previously? (please look into attached images)
I agree with all of this. I think it looks best without the comma, and with either a half-character space or a full-character space between the two halves. Try it both ways and see which looks better to you. DEFINITELY have it checked by a native speaker of Chinese. There should be multiple websites through which you can get a native check of something this length for free.I prefer #3. Note that your #1 is different from #2, #3, and #4. Also, I don't think you need or want the comma in there - although the conventions of punctuation might be different for Chinese. Bear in mind this is a Japanese forum, and you probably need the validation of the whole thing from a Chinese speaker.