The only English-language translation I could find on the web is here: https://tspace.library.utoronto.ca/bitstream/1807/29740/1/Han_Hee_Yeon_C_201105_PhD_thesis.pdfWould someone help me translate this shoji screen?
I suspect, rather, that your source is wrong. The versions you identify as correct only show up in a single file on the web, from Hirosaki University, as far as I can find. In contrast, the versions as written on the byobu appear in numerous sources on the web.*The order of the kanji is wrong. 今朝同此席 is correct.
**The writer miswrote the first two kanji. It should be 聲斷（＝声断）留餘響.
Thank you for assisting me. The following are the sewn artwork on the other side of the screen. Can you translate these too?Yeah, I actually realized that google search results says that the version in that picture exists after posting my reply. :facepalm: