Please proofread my sentences

[hirashin]

Dear native English speakers,
Would you please check my sentences?
1 I ordered a sandwich with a cup of coffee.
2 The people in the village usually eat uncooked food such as bananas or tomatoes.
3 Both Mary and Jane are very good at speaking Japanese.
4 This restaurant serves many kinds of healthy meals.
5 If I were you, I would buy this cellphone.
6 If it wasn't raining hard, I would go shopping.
7 You should eat this vegetable with beans sauce.
8 All the meals the restaurant serves are delicious.
9 This food is made from corn flour.
10 If the water supply was stopped, people couldn't live in this desert.
11 If I were you, I would accept his offer.
12 You should study both English and Math.
13 You should go to developing countries such as Uganda and Malawi.
14 a) If Mike was here, he would help me.
b) If Mike were here, he would help me.
15 a) If I wasn't sick, I could help you.
b) If I weren't sick, I could help you.
16 a) The meal I ate at this restaurant last week was delicious.
b) The meal I had at this restaurant last week was delicious.

Thanks in advance.
Hirashin

 

[diligentcircle]

You should eat this vegetable with beans sauce.

Do you mean a sauce called "vegetable with beans", or a particular vegetable with "beans sauce"?

If the former, I would prefer "use" over "eat" unless you're just eating the sauce by itself (which sounds really odd because usually a sauce is meant to be used with something else), and my dialectal preference would be for "and" over "with".

If the latter, I would strongly prefer "bean sauce". Illogical, I know, but much easier to say and it's what's usually done (as in "chicken noodle soup").

Everything else is perfect as far as I can tell.

 

[hirashin]

Thank you for the help, Julimaruchan.