Rinilex
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- 20 Feb 2013
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旅立つ前、俺たちは記念に写真を撮ったね。三人がいつも一緒にいたという証として。右に俺、左にリュウイチ、そして真ん中にはお前が微笑んでいた。その愛しい笑顔は俺の心に深く刻まれているんだ。永遠に続く友情として。ただ、あの時の俺にはこれが最後の写真になってしまうとは思ってもいなかった。
永遠に続く友情として - this sentence doesn't seem to fit to me. "(Carved into my heart) as our everlasting friendship"? 愛しい笑顔 seems only to refer to her, and their relationship was more of a romantic one - he only referred to the relationship between all 3 of them as 友情. Don't think it works as a stand alone sentence, either...
永遠に続く友情として - this sentence doesn't seem to fit to me. "(Carved into my heart) as our everlasting friendship"? 愛しい笑顔 seems only to refer to her, and their relationship was more of a romantic one - he only referred to the relationship between all 3 of them as 友情. Don't think it works as a stand alone sentence, either...