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dhmkhkk

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Hi guys,

could someone please check this passage for me? It should sound kind of scientific. Corrections and suggestions how to make it sound better are very, very welcome :) Thank you!

With the ongoing digital transformation, it seems only a matter of time until paper based ballots are replaced with electronic voting. However, secure cryptographic e-voting protocols are known to be notoriously challenging to design and not easy to be understood. For our bachelor thesis, we have implemented the same protocol, on(?) which Genevas next e-voting system will be based on(?), and built an application that makes it possible to interactively experience the next-generation e-voting protocol.
 

Julie.chan

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I see you noticed the redundancy with the two "on"s. You can remove either of them. You should also remove the comma before the first "on".

What is "Genevas"? There's a mistake there, but I'm not sure exactly what the mistake is because I don't know what "Genevas" is (in particular whether it's singular or plural, and how it relates to the voting system).
 

dhmkhkk

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Thank you very much for your correction! It is supposed to be "Geneva's". It's a city in Switzerland.
 
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