Action Sequence :Comments?

[Snoozer]

This scene is almost over (it starts two pages before the first page) There are only 2 pages left to go... We tried very hard to present a fast, powerful, and exciting scene... I'm not sure how well it work, over all I'm pretty pleased.

Any Comments?

CB
Alpha Shade Pages

 

[dreamer]

Hum...i dunno how o say it but...i get the feeling that something is lacking...
technically it's really good but it seems too...static?

 

[Mayura]

well yeah, agree with dreamy... ^^" but it's kinda good!

 

[Eternal Wind]

Too good! very nice concept!

 

[TyPe-ZeRo]

the art is friggin awsome! keep it up