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shaphat

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I'm struggling with translating a phrase, I really would like some help with this

伝ういつしか の おと 足掻く ほど 絡む マリオネット
Tsutau itsushika no oto agaku hodo karamu Marionette

The options I wrote, but I'm unconvinced:

walking unnoticed without making a sound, entangled Marionette
Until when will you walk unnoticed without sound, bound marionette
The entangled marionette is Walking quiety avoiding making a sound
 

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Those are two clauses, not a single sentence.
I highly suspect that いつしか is a misuse of いつか.
You misunderstood the meanings of 伝う and あがく.
Have you learned a structure ~ほど…, "the more~, the more..."?
 

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Those are two clauses, not a single sentence.
I highly suspect that いつしか is a misuse of いつか.
You misunderstood the meanings of 伝う and あがく.
Have you learned a structure ~ほど…, "the more~, the more..."?
well, I don't know if it's a misuse or not, to be honest I have no idea how to tackle this phrase which is why I'm asking, the whole thing makes no sense to me.
 

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伝う is used as the classical form of 伝わる there.
つたわる【伝わる】
1 〔伝導・伝達される〕be conveyed [transmitted]((to)); travel
熱は銅線を伝わる
Electricity 「travels through [is carried by] copper wire.
この金網には電気が伝わっている
The wire mesh is charged with electricity.
列車の音はここ[この高さ]までは伝わって来ない
The noise of the trains does not reach [come up] this far.
彼の緊張が彼女にも伝わったようだ
His tension seems to have affected her, too.
彼の悲しみがひしひしと伝わって来る
I can really feel his grief.
伝わるの英語・英訳 - goo辞書 英和和英

あがく【足掻く】
II 〔もがき苦しむ〕struggle
彼は水面に浮かび上がろうと必死であがいた
He struggled desperately to get to the surface.
彼はしばらく川中であがいていたが間もなく見えなくなった
He floundered [flailed] in the river for a short while and then sank out of sight.
彼は悲惨な境涯から何とか抜け出ようとあがいた
He struggled [strove] to escape from the miserable circumstances he was in.
足掻くの英語・英訳 - goo辞書 英和和英
 

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Probably, the classical forms 伝う and いつしか are used for rhyming.
伝ういつしかの音色(おと) 足掻くほど絡む傀儡(マリオネット)
繋ぐいくつかの伏線(いと) 既視感で染まった悪夢のようきっと
 Anyway, it's a very strange song, to say the least.

足掻く ほど=足掻けば足掻くほど in everyday use
 
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いつか
2 過去の不定の時を表す。いつぞや。以前。「―来た道」「―読んだ本」

いつか(聞いた)音が(私に?)伝わる   その音
マリオネットが(私に?)絡む  そのマリオネット
 

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The subject of 絡む must be the strings of the marionette; the more the marionette struggles, the more its strings get entangled.
 
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